Some things you might address are:
When you provide your own Cannabis to a business such as ours, you should not be forced to have it tested for mold/mildew/pesticides nor should you ever be forced to have it tested for THC and CBD content.
There's a huge conflict of interest when the head of the ACMM owns a testing facility and is on the rules committee for creating dispensary rules, and the rule is testing, testing, testing. Was this conflict addressed?
As it is written, no minors, even if they are the patient, may be onsite at a dispensary. That means those parents who have young babies who stop in to pick up their Smokeless Cannabis Remedies will have to arrange daycare. Please tell why this is so, when CANNABIS CANNOT KILL YOU BY OVERDOSE yet everything in a pharmacy could kill you ... and people of all ages can enter those establishments.
There is more ... but this is a good start. Feel free to send copies to your representative as well as the Governor, and THANK YOU for taking action!